Comments for Gurpinder's Weblog http://gurpindergill29.wordpress.com Just another WordPress.com weblog Tue, 20 May 2008 05:44:30 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on peace poster by MIss Shen http://gurpindergill29.wordpress.com/2008/05/16/peace-poster-2/#comment-7 MIss Shen Tue, 20 May 2008 05:44:30 +0000 http://gurpindergill29.wordpress.com/?p=70#comment-7 Technical “Must Haves” for Layout 30 / 30 Used Illustrator for Final 14 / 14 Includes illustrator created graphical element. 10 / 10 Main imagery decent at 72dpi 5 / 5 Attempt to provide visual hierarchy. 4 / 4 Attempt to use text and fonts to assist in layout. 3 / 3 Image quality min 150dpi - / 3 Message is original. 3 / 3 Visual Hierarchy is clear. 1 / 2 Stands out amongst other posters. 1 / 3 Creativity & effort above “canned” features - / 3 Fonts & Text choice, clarity, legibility, porportions, spelling. 1 / 3 Quality of images is good. 1 / 3 Proportions are realistic. 2 / 3 Message brings up emotion and truth. - / 3 Overall professional grade. - / 3 Creativity & effort includes use use of illustrator. - / 2 Typography & Image Quality Professional - / 3 75 / 100 Technical “Must Haves” for Layout 30 / 30
Used Illustrator for Final 14 / 14
Includes illustrator created graphical element. 10 / 10
Main imagery decent at 72dpi 5 / 5

Attempt to provide visual hierarchy. 4 / 4
Attempt to use text and fonts to assist in layout. 3 / 3
Image quality min 150dpi - / 3

Message is original. 3 / 3
Visual Hierarchy is clear. 1 / 2
Stands out amongst other posters. 1 / 3
Creativity & effort above “canned” features - / 3
Fonts & Text choice, clarity, legibility, porportions, spelling. 1 / 3
Quality of images is good. 1 / 3
Proportions are realistic. 2 / 3

Message brings up emotion and truth. - / 3
Overall professional grade. - / 3
Creativity & effort includes use use of illustrator. - / 2
Typography & Image Quality Professional - / 3

75 / 100

]]> Comment on “My Life” by Angie Shen http://gurpindergill29.wordpress.com/2008/03/04/my-life/#comment-6 Angie Shen Sun, 27 Apr 2008 23:01:44 +0000 http://gurpindergill29.wordpress.com/?p=44#comment-6 Technical “Must Haves” for Layout 50 / 50 Title of Artwork Posted 4 / 4 Questions Answered 4 / 5 Filters, brushes, blending modes compliment emotion. 2 / 2 Choice of Colours & Movement for emotion. 5 / 6 Spelling & Grammar in Explanation 2 / 2 Filters, brushes, blending modes visually pleasing 1 / 2 Creative use of self pic 1 / 3 Effective choice of colours/movement 3 / 5 Effort answering question A 2 / 2 Quality of image editing 4 / 5 Image proportions real 2 / 3 Creativity beyond "canned" - / 5 Emotion in viewer 1 / 3 Professional Grade - / 3 FINAL 81 / 100 Technical “Must Haves” for Layout 50 / 50

Title of Artwork Posted 4 / 4
Questions Answered 4 / 5

Filters, brushes, blending modes compliment emotion. 2 / 2
Choice of Colours & Movement for emotion. 5 / 6
Spelling & Grammar in Explanation 2 / 2

Filters, brushes, blending modes visually pleasing 1 / 2
Creative use of self pic 1 / 3
Effective choice of colours/movement 3 / 5
Effort answering question A 2 / 2
Quality of image editing 4 / 5
Image proportions real 2 / 3

Creativity beyond “canned” - / 5
Emotion in viewer 1 / 3
Professional Grade - / 3

FINAL 81 / 100

]]> Comment on ***Ąŀŀ Aßóùŧ Мοί *** by Miss Shen http://gurpindergill29.wordpress.com/about/#comment-5 Miss Shen Tue, 22 Apr 2008 15:17:59 +0000 #comment-5 Gurpinder - Photoshop Exam 1.     Start a new document 400px high by 600px wide. Set the dpi to a resolution suitable for the web. Name this file “YourName_Exam”. 3 / 3 2 – correct dimensions 1 – correct resolution 2.     Take the file “french_river.jpg” set it as the background of your new document. Name this layer “French River”. 2 / 2 1 – set as background 1 – named layer 3.     Using the clone tool and a soft brush clone this cloud onto the right side of the sky. 1 / 4 1 – duplicate 2 – used clone tool 1- soft brush 4.     Remove the sunflower out of the file “sunflower2.jpg” from its original background and place it on the right side of your exam. Name this layer “Sunflower”. 3 / 4 1- removed sunflower 2 – did a clean job 1- named layer 5.     Resize the sunflower in your exam document so that the stem starts at the bottom of your document and the height is halfway between the top of the trees and the top of the document. 1 / 3 1- resized 2 – is porportional 6.     Take the Sunflower layer and make it black and white by lowering the [Saturation]. 2 / 2 7.     Take the Sunflower layer and adjust the [Brightness/Contrast] so that the brightness is -38 and the contrast +68. 2 / 2 8.     Take the Sunflower layer and adjust the [Color Balance] to any combination you find interesting. 2 / 2 9.     Take the French River layer and apply the “angled strokes” [filter] to it. 1 / 1 10. Take the file “oval_frame.jpg” and drag the image onto your exam document. Name this layer “Oval Frame”. 2 / 2 1- dragged on 1 –named layer 11. Using a [layer mask], frame the sunflower and the French river with the oval frame. 6 / 6 1- made a frame 3- framed it with layer mask - completely transparent 2 – clean job 12. Write your name and class number on the wall of the Oval frame using Arial Black font. 2 / 2 1 - name exists 1 – correct font 13. Make the colour of the text the same colour as the darkest purple in the flowers on the wall. 0 / 2 14. Apply the “Linear Burn” [layer blend mode] to the text layer. 2 / 2 FINAL 29.00 / 37 Gurpinder – Photoshop Exam
1.     Start a new document 400px high by 600px wide. Set the dpi to a resolution suitable for the web. Name this file “YourName_Exam”. 3 / 3
2 – correct dimensions
1 – correct resolution
2.     Take the file “french_river.jpg” set it as the background of your new document. Name this layer “French River”. 2 / 2
1 – set as background
1 – named layer
3.     Using the clone tool and a soft brush clone this cloud onto the right side of the sky. 1 / 4
1 – duplicate
2 – used clone tool
1- soft brush
4.     Remove the sunflower out of the file “sunflower2.jpg” from its original background and place it on the right side of your exam. Name this layer “Sunflower”. 3 / 4
1- removed sunflower
2 – did a clean job
1- named layer
5.     Resize the sunflower in your exam document so that the stem starts at the bottom of your document and the height is halfway between the top of the trees and the top of the document. 1 / 3
1- resized
2 – is porportional
6.     Take the Sunflower layer and make it black and white by lowering the [Saturation]. 2 / 2
7.     Take the Sunflower layer and adjust the [Brightness/Contrast] so that the brightness is -38 and the contrast +68. 2 / 2
8.     Take the Sunflower layer and adjust the [Color Balance] to any combination you find interesting. 2 / 2
9.     Take the French River layer and apply the “angled strokes” [filter] to it. 1 / 1
10. Take the file “oval_frame.jpg” and drag the image onto your exam document. Name this layer “Oval Frame”. 2 / 2
1- dragged on
1 –named layer
11. Using a [layer mask], frame the sunflower and the French river with the oval frame. 6 / 6
1- made a frame
3- framed it with layer mask – completely transparent
2 – clean job
12. Write your name and class number on the wall of the Oval frame using Arial Black font. 2 / 2
1 – name exists
1 – correct font
13. Make the colour of the text the same colour as the darkest purple in the flowers on the wall. 0 / 2
14. Apply the “Linear Burn” [layer blend mode] to the text layer. 2 / 2
FINAL 29.00 / 37

]]> Comment on by Miss Shen http://gurpindergill29.wordpress.com/2008/01/29/29/#comment-4 Miss Shen Wed, 06 Feb 2008 06:08:06 +0000 http://gurpindergill29.wordpress.com/?p=29#comment-4 Technical "must haves" 50 / 50 Original pictures posted 3 / 3 Questions answered 6 / 6 Visual hierarchy attempt 4 / 4 Attempt to use text & fonts for layout assist 2 / 2 Selection removed from background 1 / 1 Visual hierarchy question correct 3 / 3 Visual hierarchy clear 2 / 3 Stands out amongst others 1 / 2 Text & Font effectiveness 4 / 4 Custom selection removed from background 1 / 2 Quality of edges smooth 1 / 3 Attempts to colour correct 0 / 2 Image proportions realistic 2 / 2 Visual hierarchy matches intentions 1 / 2 Creativity & Effort above "canned" features - / 3 Professional grade - / 3 Typography is professional - / 2 Professional quality edited elements - / 3 Final 81 / 100 Such a fresh feel to the colours that you chose for you magazine. Great stuff. See me if you’d like to talk about ways to further improve the quality of your work. Miss Shen Technical “must haves” 50 / 50
Original pictures posted 3 / 3
Questions answered 6 / 6

Visual hierarchy attempt 4 / 4
Attempt to use text & fonts for layout assist 2 / 2
Selection removed from background 1 / 1
Visual hierarchy question correct 3 / 3

Visual hierarchy clear 2 / 3
Stands out amongst others 1 / 2
Text & Font effectiveness 4 / 4
Custom selection removed from background 1 / 2
Quality of edges smooth 1 / 3
Attempts to colour correct 0 / 2
Image proportions realistic 2 / 2
Visual hierarchy matches intentions 1 / 2

Creativity & Effort above “canned” features - / 3
Professional grade - / 3
Typography is professional - / 2
Professional quality edited elements - / 3

Final 81 / 100

Such a fresh feel to the colours that you chose for you magazine. Great stuff.
See me if you’d like to talk about ways to further improve the quality of your work.
Miss Shen

]]> Comment on Fruit Bowls by Miss Shen http://gurpindergill29.wordpress.com/2008/01/11/fruit-bowls/#comment-3 Miss Shen Thu, 17 Jan 2008 03:37:32 +0000 http://gurpindergill29.wordpress.com/2008/01/11/fruit-bowls/#comment-3 How is the feather tool different from the expand and contract tool? How is the feather tool different from the expand and contract tool?

]]> Comment on ***Ąŀŀ Aßóùŧ Мοί *** by Miss Shen http://gurpindergill29.wordpress.com/about/#comment-2 Miss Shen Tue, 08 Jan 2008 05:08:23 +0000 #comment-2 Blog Setup 5 / 5 Profile & Polaroid Posted 2 / 2 Profile & Polaroid Posted on About Page 3 / 3 Theme Chosen 1 / 1 Polaroid Complete 5 / 5 Technical “Must Haves” 4 / 5 Technical Details 2 / 2 Creativity & Effort above “must haves” - / 1 Profile Questions Answered 5 / 5 Text Formatting above “must haves” 1 / 1 FINAL 28 / 30 Notes: Hey Girl… I love the theme you chose. Wow you have a cute little 1 year old running around your house! How fun! But I’m sure work for you too as you help your parents with him ehy? Great stuff with the blog, the only real thing that I’d like to explore with you is what happened to your drop shadow and why it turned out the way it did? Check out the posts “Blog Evaluation Criteria” & “Blog Common Errors” on my blog. Compare your mark so far to the above posts. If you choose to, make the improvements in quality for your blog and resubmit it for remarking. Make sure to let me know what you’ve improved. Miss Shen :) Blog Setup 5 / 5
Profile & Polaroid Posted 2 / 2
Profile & Polaroid Posted on About Page 3 / 3
Theme Chosen 1 / 1

Polaroid Complete 5 / 5
Technical “Must Haves” 4 / 5
Technical Details 2 / 2
Creativity & Effort above “must haves” - / 1

Profile Questions Answered 5 / 5
Text Formatting above “must haves” 1 / 1

FINAL 28 / 30

Notes:
Hey Girl…
I love the theme you chose.
Wow you have a cute little 1 year old running around your house! How fun! But I’m sure work for you too as you help your parents with him ehy?

Great stuff with the blog, the only real thing that I’d like to explore with you is what happened to your drop shadow and why it turned out the way it did?

Check out the posts “Blog Evaluation Criteria” & “Blog Common Errors” on my blog.

Compare your mark so far to the above posts. If you choose to, make the improvements in quality for your blog and resubmit it for remarking. Make sure to let me know what you’ve improved.

Miss Shen :)

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